How to correct a flawed composition

I created my original painting around this time last year, having been inspired by the vast fantasy landscapes by artists like Dongbiao Lu and Ruxing Gao. It was my first stylised environment artwork. 

A year later I was interested to see how I could improve the piece. There was something very successful about it that was most likely a happy accident at the time, but had continued to evade my understanding until now. 

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Thomas (also known as Tck) is a concept artist who has recently started his first job at Atomhawk Design. He loves food and music; consumption and creation.